Black Panther or Leopard

posted March 7th, 2014, 12:20 pm


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March 7th, 2014, 12:59 pm

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typo in panel 1 :V

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March 7th, 2014, 1:06 pm

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@Lottos35: Ack, show me! I'll make sure it's fixed for the printed version :) Thanks

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March 7th, 2014, 1:11 pm

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@Morbidprince: "I hated the monthly check ups. I hated their babblings to me about the most INANE things. and then try to breed me."

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March 7th, 2014, 1:31 pm

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@Lottos35: Thank you, but it is spelt INANE yes? How should it be spelt?

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March 7th, 2014, 2:01 pm

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@Morbidprince: ... *isn't from america so doesn't know some words*

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March 7th, 2014, 2:13 pm

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@Morbidprince: Insane. If that's the word you were looking for. ^^"

Inane is also a word though XD

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March 7th, 2014, 2:40 pm

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@Lottos35: That's okay, thank you so much for trying to help!! :) Really appreciate it! Don't be afraid to point out anything if you see them in the future!

@Angelic_Otaku: Inane is the one I meant to use :) Thanks for being so helpful guys!!

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March 8th, 2014, 1:29 am

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I'm from America and inane is the right word to use. The definition of inane is silly or stupid.

Although I don't think "And then they try to breed me." seems right.

I would say try using "And then they tried to breed me."

But since he did father some cubs from the felines perhaps it should be "And then they wanted to breed me."

Also, there should be a period after babblings.

Hope I helped. :)

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March 8th, 2014, 9:00 am

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@Mistress0fDragons: thanks so much!! Yes this is very helpful for me I'll make sure to mark this page before giving to my editor so she can pay closer attention.

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March 9th, 2014, 1:11 am

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@Morbidprince: You're welcome. :) Glad I was able to help.

If you ever need help with American terms or need help with phrasing, just @Mistress0fDragons in your comment if you need some help.

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March 14th, 2014, 12:03 pm

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@Mistress0fDragons: For sure! Thanks so much :) Really appreciate :3

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March 16th, 2014, 10:06 pm

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@Morbidprince: You're welcome. ^_^

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March 29th, 2014, 9:39 pm

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VERY happy to see you using correct facts for leopards :) No such thing as black panthers. Only black leopards and jaguars. You did excellent, Dina!

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June 19th, 2014, 12:00 am

Saddie (Guest)

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This page was cute. To think, the Prince had some cubs in a Zoo is adorable! I loove it. I really liked the panel of the Prince as a "Panther" surrounded by females, well technically Leopards hehe. But I still love this page, it's cute & funny.

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January 4th, 2015, 3:08 am

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WTF ZOO omg this is way too funny...

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